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4. Kohtalon keihäs / palautus 16.11.2008

Postby Queenbitch on Mon Nov 10, 2008 16:55

Otsikolla Kohtalon keihäs, 250 sanaa.

Palautus sunnuntaina 16.11.2008 klo 20.00 mennessä.
"Isolate that signal! Master Chief, mind telling me what you're doing on that ship?"
"Sir. Finishing this fight."
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Re: 4. Kohtalon keihäs / palautus 16.11.2008

Postby phann on Tue Nov 11, 2008 23:20

"But you have lifted the curse! You have taken it upon yourself! Another vet has touched the monkey's bollocks!"
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Re: 4. Kohtalon keihäs / palautus 16.11.2008

Postby Queenbitch on Thu Nov 13, 2008 16:04

"Isolate that signal! Master Chief, mind telling me what you're doing on that ship?"
"Sir. Finishing this fight."
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Re: 4. Kohtalon keihäs / palautus 16.11.2008

Postby Queenbitch on Wed Feb 04, 2009 18:08

Phannin teksti vetää ihastuttavaa rinnastusta. "Olivatko Andrein palkkapaskiaiset laittaneet hänet ristille roikkumaan" aloittaa hienojen viittausten sarjan, "siihen saattaa mennä pari päivää" lopettaa sen. Siinä missä oma tekstini otti sananmukaisemman lähestymistavan aiheeseen, tämä sekoittaa kiehtovalla tavalla oikeita tapahtumia, omaa tarinaansa ja myyttejä. Tarkat sanavalinnat johdattava pätkää eteenpäin.

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